Charli Coty

LGBTQIA+ fiction with happy endings

A rough draft snippet!

12649563133_c2a35104e5_bHello Snippetteers!

For our last weekend of 2016 and first of 2017, I’m sharing a new story. It’s so new, I haven’t even written 1,000 words as I’m posting this! I know the whole story, though, so now all I have to do is write it. No sweat. 😉

This pic is tied in to the story, sort of, but I’ll wait until it’s at least drafted before going into any detail. Don’t want to scare the story away! *lol* (<<< only half joking)

Please squint when you read this snippet–it’s rough because I just wrote it a few minutes ago.


A slightly wicked smile curled the corners of her mouth. She caught me watching, maybe a little too intently, and slowly drew her tongue across her bottom lip. “Yes. I could use some help.”

“Um…okay. Come on out of the water and I’ll give you my jacket.”


Thanks for reading!

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Happy New Year!


photo credit: Novafly kayano_481 via photopin (license)

About Charley Descoteaux

I write LGBTQ+ Erotic Romance because watching two (or more!) people figure out how to be happy makes me happy too. Every one of them deserves a beautiful love story, and as long as they keep telling them to me, I’ll keep writing them down. It's the only way I've found to convince them to let me sleep.

9 comments on “A rough draft snippet!

  1. P.T. Wyant
    December 31, 2016

    This should be interesting. Somehow I don’t think the two of them are on exactly the same wavelength at the moment.


  2. jlmerrow
    December 31, 2016

    Would I be too far off base to guess she’s not wearing a swimsuit? 😉


  3. rhodrymavelyne
    December 31, 2016

    Ooo, very hot!


  4. Addison Albright
    December 31, 2016

    Fun scene, and my guess is the scene that follows is even more so! 🙂


  5. AM
    December 31, 2016

    Ha! She seems like she’s enjoying messing with whoever is out of the water watching her.


  6. Jackie Keswick
    January 1, 2017



  7. Jana Denardo
    January 5, 2017

    Interesting teaser.


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